I did talk with my lawyer, and I left a voicemail with you regarding this. My lawyer thought there were a few problems with the "Offer to Purchase" letter: 1) >$500 deposit. My lawyer says that, if a broker were involved, the broker would usually require a 5% non-refundable deposit. The 5% figure is certainly negotiable, but it would make sense to have a second larger deposit after either an appraisal report or an inspection report is issued, if not before. 2) financing contingency. If you as buyer supply more than 20% down towards your loan, then there is less likely to be any problems with the loan. Specifying that in the offer would alleviate any worries. 3) closing date. A specific closing date or a range of closing dates is missing. I guess once these issues are addressed, we can go through it again. :-)