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Re: please review my first draft of my solstice message
- To: noelle
- Subject: Re: please review my first draft of my solstice message
- From: Robert <http://dummy.us.eu.org/robert>
- Date: Sat, 12 Dec 2020 10:31:07 -0800
- Keywords: our-Oakland-cell-phone-number
OK, here are my changes based on my own review and your suggestions.
You only need to pay attend to the lines with '+' or '-' in front of them.
'+' is the new version, and '-' is the old version.
Thanks.